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Old 04-28-2011, 04:29 PM   #1
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My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

So I had the option to write an extra credit poem for my English so I wrote about my favorite anit-hero Deadpool! I would like your honest opinion (since this is my first poem)

The Merc with the Mouth

I hit my foes with my hyper bar when they push me too far.
When my opponents come near I have nothing to fear.
For I shall cut you with my Katana and I slam you down with a yo mama!!!
You’re on the ground when the shots rang
Followed by my BANG, BANG, BANG
When things go awry
I say “Magneto welcome to die!!!!”
I am the merc with the mouth
And no
I am not from the south.
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Old 04-28-2011, 05:47 PM   #2
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Re: My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth



Deadpool <3
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Old 04-28-2011, 06:12 PM   #3
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Re: My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

Pretty cool!

What was the extra credit prompt? Like, just any poem or were you supposed to follow a certain pattern?
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Re: My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

Did your teacher ever come back? ;-p
(That was actually all right--good job!)
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Old 05-01-2011, 05:33 PM   #5
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Old 05-02-2011, 01:09 PM   #6
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Re: My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

Well my teacher just said create a poem for extra credit I raised my hand and asked " can it be about anything??" she said yes and I had a evil smirk. But she's old so she won't get who the merc with the mouth is.
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Re: My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

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Well my teacher just said create a poem for extra credit I raised my hand and asked " can it be about anything??" she said yes and I had a evil smirk. But she's old so she won't get who the merc with the mouth is.
inb4 deadpool is her fav comicbook char.
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