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06-21-2011, 12:25 AM | #1 |
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Sleeping Under the Sun (original poem)
I wrote this poem for a guy that I'm struggling with. It's a free verse and I'm not looking for any professional responses but just if my message is stated clearly. Any response would be appreciated though (such as personal input). I describe a dream that I had the other "day" about a guy that lives very far away from me.
So sleeping under the Sun,*EDIT: The poem actually has many complex emotions to it besides the obvious "love letter" theme. It's very personal to me, and I would like to know what you guys think! :)
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06-21-2011, 12:38 AM | #2 |
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Re: Sleeping Under the Sun (original poem)
I actually really enjoyed it. The message does seem clear. At least to me it is. And I think it contains a fairly decent amount of emotion in it, too. Thumbs up!
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:) Very appreciated.
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Re: Sleeping Under the Sun (original poem)
Very nice!
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T-Thanks :D It makes me happy to see that, xD, I'm too easily satisfied. :P
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Re: Sleeping Under the Sun (original poem)
It is meaningful and heart touching. A lovely poem about love.
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