My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

[Rhetorical Gamer]

So I had the option to write an extra credit poem for my English so I wrote about my favorite anit-hero Deadpool! I would like your honest opinion (since this is my first poem)

The Merc with the Mouth

I hit my foes with my hyper bar when they push me too far.
When my opponents come near I have nothing to fear.
For I shall cut you with my Katana and I slam you down with a yo mama!!!
You’re on the ground when the shots rang
Followed by my BANG, BANG, BANG
When things go awry
I say “Magneto welcome to die!!!!”
I am the merc with the mouth
And no
I am not from the south.