ic - Art Critique Thread

We have a lot of personal threads, and some general threads, but I figure a thread to post art for critique would be a good idea. Of course it would be lame to open this up without a piece to critique, so here's one I just made.

This is for serious critique, so don't post if you can't take negative comments on your stuff. Also, please don't turn this into a dA pat on the back fest. be cruel people! (Well not cruel, but seriously critical)