Naruto Fanfiction

So yeah. I've been writing a short Naruto story over the last little while, since writing based around that anime is extremely easy in my opinion. So yeah. These are all original characters for the most part, except for skills and overall Naruto based things. I'll post the profiles for the two main characters, Jinn and Kumo, here before posting the first two chapters of the story as well as the back story for them. Those two are the only constant characters I'll use, unless a character of importance shows up. I'll update the second post as I complete each chapter.

Main Characters

Character name: Hyuuga, Jinn
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Village: Leaf
Appearance:

Personality: An simple and easy-going person that is dedicated to his task and his way of the ninja. Cheerful, Sometimes goofy, and protective of his friends and family, Jinn is a skilled ninja.
History: Jinn is one of two Identical Twins. The weaker of the two, Jinn has still pushed himself to keep up with is brother, Hitomu, who has amazing strength and intelligence. At the age of 18, Hitomu left the Village of Konoha to search for his 'destiny'. Jinn tried to stop his brother from leaving the village, and a small fight ensued where Hitomu was forced to knock Jinn unconcious with a small burst of chakrato the forehead. Since that day, Jinn continues to train to defeat his brother and draghim home.
Ninja info:
Rank: Jounin
Department/specialty: Chakra Specialist
Clan/family : Hyuuga Clan
Bloodline: Byakugan - A full 360 degree vision, and ability to look further into the distance and through objects.
Jyuuken - Meaning "Soft Palm". With the ability to release chakra through any point in their bodies, the Jyuuken fighting style releases chakra through the palms and fingers to do internal damage to the opponent.
Weapons:
Ordinary Ninja Tools
Specially Made Explosive Kunai - A golden colored kunai with a special explosive summoning tag attached. When the kunai explodes, it instantly summons and launches 5 normal explosive note kunai's in 5 random directions.
Skills:
Battle style: Specialist with close range battle, and prefers to use wind style jutsus.
Specific abilities:
~ Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
~ Bunshin no Jutsu
~ Kawarimi no Jutsu
~ Henge no Jutsu
~ Hyuuga Style Taijutsu (Gentle Fist) (Jyuuken)
~ Byakugan
~ Divination Field, 64 Strikes (Hakke Rokujuu Yonshou)
~ Divination Field, 128 Strikes (Hakke Hyaku Nijuha Sho)
~ Heavenly Spin (Hakke Shou Kaiten)
~ Divination Field, Air Palm (Hakke Kuushou)
~ Divination Field, Multiple Air Palm (Tajuu Hakke Kuushou)
~ Divination Field, All Point Strike
~ Heavenly Reflection
~ Wind Blade (Kaze no Yaiba)
Summons: Galestorm Falcon "Mazomaru" - A enormous bird that has powerful control over the elements. Jinn rarely uses this summon in battle, as Jinn perfers to handle things with his own hands.
Other: N/A

Character Name: Kumo Shingetsu
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Village: Sunagakure
Appearance: Kumo(Left) and her sister, Rei(Right)

Personality: Relatively calm and quiet around most people, and even somewhat shy. But when she's with friends, she's loud, hyper, and happy. It takes quite a bit to earn her trust, but she will protect the ones who have it with her life. The same goes for respect; very few ever earn it, but it's worth it. The words 'sir', ma'am', etc, don't exist in her vocabulary otherwise. Finally, she absolutely loves to fight, and will rarely refuse a challenge, especially from Jinn.
History: Born in the Village of Sand, she was orphaned at a young age and soon after was forced to leave her home, and her sister, to live in the Leaf Village. At first, she blamed Konoha for the death of her parents, and hated everyone there. But after meeting with Jinn and fighting with him, she started to see that she was wrong. After seeing her sister, Rei, again during the war, she wants nothing more than to find her again and convince her to return home.

Ninja Info:
Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Clan: Shingetsu Clan
Bloodline: Unknown. The Shingetsu Clan was known for copying several unique bloodline techniques, however.
Weapons: Kunai, smoke bombs, and (homemade) hand grenades
Skills:
Kaze no Yaiba
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Henge no Jutsu
Katon, Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Katon, Ryuuka no Jutsu
Doton Doryuuheki
Kanashibari no Jutsu
Summons: Avior, an oversized red and white lion with power over fire.
Other: Wants nothing more than to defeat Jinn at something!

Back Story

Jinn and Kumo first met when Kumo's Kitsune mask was accidently taken by a very young and scared girl. At the time, Kumo didn't like any Konoha ninja. Probably still doesn't except for a select few. So Kumo chased after the little rascal with an intent to kill in order to get her Kitsume Mask back, using her well mastered Kaze no Yaiba in the process. The girl came across Jinn who was patrolling the village near Ichiraku Ramen, and noticing the rather angry and dangerous ninja chasing her, went straight into a defensive position to protect the girl. After quickly dispatching Kumo with some quickly placed Hyuuga Style Taijutsu, easily cancelling the chakra in both her arms temporarily. Kumo then fled.

The next time Jinn and Kumo saw each other, they were being forced to work together. The Village of Suna was attacked by a powerful, unknown force of Ninjas, and under the current situation. Gaara, the Kazekage of Sunakagure, ordered all ninjas and civilians to flee to Konoha. When they arrived, Tsunade, the Hokage of Konohakagure immediately knew how serious the power of the invading army was if Suna was forced to withdraw. While gathering the for a joint counter attack of both Suna and Konoha's strongest Ninjas, Gaara and Tsunade decided to send a two man team into Suna and begin information gathering. This is when Jinn and Kumo began their first mission as a team.

Neither Kumo nor Jinn made it into Suna together easily, as they were attacked by many ninjas on their path to the village, resorting to flight in order to get into the village in the end. They did not last long in the village with their pressense revealed and all ninjas searching for them. Instead of being killed on the spot, they were poisioned and knocked out by a team of medical ninjas who were the ones to find them. When they awoke, they were behind jailcell bars in an unknown part of Suna. Well, at least it was unknown to Jinn, where as Kumo knew exactly where she was. They were greeted by a mysterious guard, who was soon to be revealed as Jinn's twin brother, Hitomu. Hitomu told Jinn and Kumo that he was the one that led the attack on Suna, as he had prior knowledge of the layout of the land.

Hitomu then left, leaving Jinn and Kumo to escape from the prison by blowing a hole in the wall opposite the bars. Jumping out of the prison building, they landed in front of Hitomu and his partner for this mission, Avian. A bulk of a man. Hitomu knew Jinn and Kumo would waste no time in escaping and waited for the opportunity to attack. Jinn, wanting to beat the crap out of his dear brother for leaving Konoha and becoming a Missing-Nin, left Kumo to fight with Avian. Jinn did not stand much of a chance against his brother, who was greatly superior in battle. The same was for Kumo, who was overpowered in the end by the massive strength of Avian. In a unknown burst of strength and power radiating from Jinn when he saw Kumo about to be defeated, Jinn moved with amazing speed and stopped Avian in mid punch, where Kumo quickly took the chance and lobbed off Avian's head in one swift swing of her Kaze no Yaiba.

Hitomu fled the village when word of the joint counter attack reached his ears, and medical ninjas arrived to provide aid to any injured ninjas just as Jinn pasted out from his injuries from his battle with Hitomu, and his chakra exhaustion from the strange burst of power.

After the success counter attack to reclaim Sunakagure, Jinn and Kumo, as a show of friendship between Konoha and Suna, were made a 2 person team permanently. Jinn and Kumo went on many missions after the takeover of Suna, and a month passed before they heard from Hitomu again. This time, the mysterious ninjas that attacked and took over the Village of Suna, was now targetting Konoha. Instead of just attacking, they waited outside the village, with Hitomu standing in front of them all. Jinn knew he was calling him, and took off at Tsunade's command to defend the village. With the help of Kumo and his summon, Jinn was able to easily take down a large portion of the army, and the two ninjas yet again stood before Hitomu.

Hitomu had a new partner this time. Someone, who had prior knowledge of Kumo. Before Kumo could get an answer on who she was, they fight began against Hitomu. The fight was a large power struggle, where Hitomu would attack and Jinn and Kumo would try and force it back to counter, only for the counter to be turned against them. They managed to hold out for quite awhile until Hitomu grew tired of the fight with them, and began to attack with his strongest Jutsus. Before a severely powerful Water Dragon struck Jinn and Kumo, the mysterious partner that came with Hitomu froze the Water Dragon in mid air, claiming that Hitomu was told not to harm Kumo. She finally explained that she was Kumo's sister. She has been travelling with Hitomu when she learned that he had encountered her sister. No more information was given as Hitomu and Rei left the battlefield, leaving Jinn and Kumo to limp back to the village.

The story continues the next day, where Jinn and Kumo are still recovering from their battle. Kumo was sent back to her home in Suna to relax for a few days before resuming with her missions with Jinn. Jinn, already in Konoha, instead went into training. What they didn't know, was their two person team was about to get a new member, in light of their lack of power in their recent battle.