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Forum: Literature 02-16-2012, 11:03 PM
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Posted By homie_jiraiya
Re: Bittersweet Violin

too many repeated words, the more descriptive termsneed to be first then the nondescript( ie glass should be something like chalice or grail or goblet)
second order of the dragon was led by dracula ...
Forum: Literature 02-13-2012, 11:46 PM
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Posted By homie_jiraiya
Re: Bittersweet Violin

ahem... do you really want honesty and if so shall it apear in its utter brutalitty or shall i garb the beast in niceties as too stay the crushing blow
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