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Forum: Literature 01-04-2010, 04:50 PM
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Posted By Oni
Re: The Cabin

I'd agree, a lot of 'she' in there. I get that the character is anonymous and doesn't have a name, but you could replaced those with things like 'the girl' and stuff.

Other than that, good job.
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