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10-06-2010, 11:56 PM

Oh, don't forget the filler! LOL JK but anyway, great uses of random things for a story. Now just edit it into paragraphs and not a block of text that I see, almost took me away from reading it.

10-06-2010, 11:56 PM	#10
Fan Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 149 Rep Power: 0	Re: The Neversummer Chronology Zodiac Killing Doom Machine Part 1 Oh, don't forget the filler! LOL JK but anyway, great uses of random things for a story. Now just edit it into paragraphs and not a block of text that I see, almost took me away from reading it.