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Old 08-03-2011, 11:21 AM   #3
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Re: Two Suns (original poem)

I really enjoyed the poem. Further, I don't think "spamming" would be an issue of concern within the literature section, even in reference to edits or variations of the same poem. (But of course, I'm not the moderator...)

And, Gatx, if I might respectfully disagree with a point of yours, I personally do not think elegant to be redundant. Elegance, while hinting at beauty, more strongly emphasizes order; therefore, elegant merely reinforces rather than repeats the idea of beauty. (At least in my mind...)
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