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Forum: Literature 08-02-2011, 03:00 AM
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Posted By Gatx
Re: Two Suns (original poem)

Just some quick comments.

Respectfulness is kind of unwieldy, "respect" alone gets the point across.

"Elegant" also seems a little extraneous in the last line, you're already conveying...
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