My Sun (original poem)
I was extremely inspired. As you can tell, by nature. I have two other short-quick poems that I'd like to submit so please check them out as well as my first. I'd really want input on these as I've only just begun again to write this crap. Another free verse. You may think this an interesting idea, I sort of do. I want to know if the message is clear and other personal inputs, hm? Sorry for so many posts here guys.
Sparkling, enticing, I want to touch.I may edit this some more. |
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Nicely done. Who is Pavel?
Also, why haven't you made an intro topic yet in the introductions forum? :o |
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and Pavel is my ex-boyfriend's name. We are kind of suffering right now xD but I'm too optimistic to be down. :P I've made this account long ago; I think I did. But if not was probably because I think the forum wouldn't allow. I'll do it again though since those introductions are always fun. :) |
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Keep them coming!
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