My extra credit English class poem: The Merc with the mouth

[Rhetorical Gamer]

So I had the option to write an extra credit poem for my English so I wrote about my favorite anit-hero Deadpool! I would like your honest opinion (since this is my first poem) #thumbup

The Merc with the Mouth

I hit my foes with my hyper bar when they push me too far.
When my opponents come near I have nothing to fear.
For I shall cut you with my Katana and I slam you down with a yo mama!!!
You’re on the ground when the shots rang
Followed by my BANG, BANG, BANG
When things go awry
I say “Magneto welcome to die!!!!”
I am the merc with the mouth
And no
I am not from the south.

[Zero Gravity]

http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/0/378/112111-99672-deadpool_super.jpg

Deadpool <3

[mahay]

Pretty cool!

What was the extra credit prompt? Like, just any poem or were you supposed to follow a certain pattern?

[moonhawk81]

Did your teacher ever come back? ;-p
(That was actually all right--good job!)

[Shidohari]

good job

[Rhetorical Gamer]

Well my teacher just said create a poem for extra credit I raised my hand and asked " can it be about anything??" she said yes and I had a evil smirk. But she's old so she won't get who the merc with the mouth is.

[mahay]

Well my teacher just said create a poem for extra credit I raised my hand and asked " can it be about anything??" she said yes and I had a evil smirk. But she's old so she won't get who the merc with the mouth is.

inb4 deadpool is her fav comicbook char. #wut